Saturday, June 18, 2011

Tonight I Lie Dreaming

   Today I had to look up the difference between to lay and to lie. The problem comes, for me, when to lie becomes the past tense lay. Confused? So am I.
   I decided to play with the concept of laying and lying, so I wrote a poem.
   "Tonight I Lie Dreaming" is the title. That is present tense. Last night I lay dreaming, is past tense. Now I lay me down to sleep is also present tense.

Tonight I Lie Dreaming
by Zach Knell

     Tonight I lie dreaming, as every kid would
     The reason is simple, though not understood.

     Why in the night do our minds come alive
     And color and movement and music arrive?

     The world is harmonic with sunshine aglow
     Water is clear, through it's rapids we row.

     The leaves on the tree often shake with the wind
     Not violently, softly, our fears they rescind

     No you can't move mountains though people have tried
     But surely in dreams I can push them aside

     I fly in the air full of lucidity
     up and beyond and past infinity
   
     If only, if only, in dreams could we live
     The sins of the past we could better forgive

     Tonight I lie dreaming, as every kid would
     The reason is simple, everyone should.

    

    

    
    
    

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